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Ritz_Crackers · 15-06-2007, 11:15

Originally Posted by Sidra240

Whilst studying full-time at college, I have carried out extra curricula activities.

Can you see it now? It's supposed to be CURRICULAR

Ridz · 15-06-2007, 11:17

Lolzz ritz how picky!!!

Angel · 15-06-2007, 11:20

hay ne one how do you get on to bebo using liars.com

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:24

Originally Posted by Ritz_Crackers

Can you see it now? It's supposed to be CURRICULAR

oh well i still got accepted hehe

And angel....do ur first draft and hand it in and then see what feedback u get

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:25

Originally Posted by Angel

hay ne one how do you get on to bebo using liars.com

Insane What is liars.com lol

Angel · 15-06-2007, 11:26

I DUN NO ITS A WAY TO GET ON TO BEBO CUZ I CANT GET ON FROM SKOOL THORU GOOGLE SO YOU GO A LONG WAY IVE BEEN TOLD IT LIARS.COM OR AM I SPELLIN IT WRONG I DONT KNOW

-666- · 15-06-2007, 13:56

Originally Posted by Angel

this is soo stupid man this is how far ive got

My love of science and aspiration for a medical career is reflected in my A-Level choices where good time management, self motivated study skills and ability to cope with stress and pressure are essential. Biology ,Physics and Chemistry have helped me further my interest and develop my analytical skills. I believe all the qualities I have developed through my courses are essential for any good doctor.I will participated in the award scheme which enabled me to achieve a first aid certificate including cardiopulmonary resuscitation training.

I also enhanced my inter-personal, communication and team building abilities, valuable skills for any medical occupation, I witnessed during my experience.I have volunteered at a local surgery this can help with the public in a different environment. I enjoy reading, mainly factual books to expand my general knowledge. To relax, I enjoy sports including basketball and football

is it ok?

Thats not a very good start. It's quite typical 'my love for....' 'My passion for..' You need something attention catching type thing.

Try and think outside the box. If you forward me your PS in pm, I'll change it around for you or something if I can be bothered. K?

Plus your A'levels are on no level to prepare you for being a doctor. Trust me.

CrazYt™ · 15-06-2007, 15:54

Angel nice to see you are interested in studying Medicine, we need more asian youthe like yourself aspiring for high degrees.
As a medical student myself I can give you some tips but I cannot tell you what to write as it has to come within yourself and meaningful, in a personal statement for a Medical degree you have to be as true as you can as interviwers for which ever uni you apply for will refer back to it most definately.

I would suggest you think of something meaningful to explain why you want to study Medicine at the outset of the statement and then build on that. Also have you done any work experience which is a MUST, without work experience in the medical field you are not going to get in. You need to mention what you do in your spare time, whether you read any medical literatures, any awards/achievements you have... but do not bullshit in your PS as they will catch you out.. unless you can back it up strongly

Anyway I hope that has put some perspective to ur PS.. if you need any help jus give us a shout or pm, I would have given you mine but I cant seem to find mine. Good luck.

PaKi PwInCeSs · 15-06-2007, 15:59

oOoh.. Good Luck with ur A levels results..

U chose exactly the same as me.. Biology.. Chemistry and Physics... Just keep at it.. Coz after I done my Alevels in sciences' uni was a big NO NO for me .. So Good Luck..x

CrazYt™ · 15-06-2007, 16:02

Originally Posted by PaKi PwInCeSs

oOoh.. Good Luck with ur A levels results..

U chose exactly the same as me.. Biology.. Chemistry and Physics... Just keep at it.. Coz after I done my Alevels in sciences' uni was a big NO NO for me .. So Good Luck..x

So u not going uni then? Thats a big shame considering you done really good A-Levels.. you can get into to do a really good degree and then get a good job...

Guji-Ji · 15-06-2007, 16:16

Man im so dreading writing my one, im a lazy mofo.

PaKi PwInCeSs · 15-06-2007, 16:19

Originally Posted by CrazYt™

So u not going uni then? Thats a big shame considering you done really good A-Levels.. you can get into to do a really good degree and then get a good job...

Not atm... Maybe later.. Its just after A levels I got really fed up with studying and I didnt want to go 2 uni and mess up.. coz I dont think ill study hard enough.. and with stuff like medicine its like a few years hard core study and the last year is work placements...

CrazYt™ · 16-06-2007, 15:55

Originally Posted by PaKi PwInCeSs

Not atm... Maybe later.. Its just after A levels I got really fed up with studying and I didnt want to go 2 uni and mess up.. coz I dont think ill study hard enough.. and with stuff like medicine its like a few years hard core study and the last year is work placements...

Oh so its not completely out of the question then thats goodat least u r considerin it, yeah u gotta be in the rite mood to go to uni u cannot mess arnd in uni... Medicine is minimum 5years and u start placement in year 3 actually not year 5... Im starting my placement next year hopefully

Zero · 22-06-2007, 16:04

Originally Posted by CrazYt™

Oh so its not completely out of the question then thats goodat least u r considerin it, yeah u gotta be in the rite mood to go to uni u cannot mess arnd in uni... Medicine is minimum 5years and u start placement in year 3 actually not year 5... Im starting my placement next year hopefully

You starting your placement next year? My bro in Law did his at Charing Cross Hospital...he said it was one of the worst places he'd ever seen lol. Guys hospital is very good I hear though! Where you looking/hoping to go?

PaKi PwInCeSs · 22-06-2007, 16:10

Originally Posted by CrazYt™

Oh so its not completely out of the question then thats goodat least u r considerin it, yeah u gotta be in the rite mood to go to uni u cannot mess arnd in uni... Medicine is minimum 5years and u start placement in year 3 actually not year 5... Im starting my placement next year hopefully

Yeh thats why I dont want 2 go.. If I aint gona put the effort in..
OoOo good luck with the placement..x
What are you studying?

15-06-2007, 15:54	#23 (permalink)
CrazYt™ Respected Member Location: UK Gender: Male Country: Posts: 1,898 Rep Power: 148 Rep Level:	Angel nice to see you are interested in studying Medicine, we need more asian youthe like yourself aspiring for high degrees. As a medical student myself I can give you some tips but I cannot tell you what to write as it has to come within yourself and meaningful, in a personal statement for a Medical degree you have to be as true as you can as interviwers for which ever uni you apply for will refer back to it most definately. I would suggest you think of something meaningful to explain why you want to study Medicine at the outset of the statement and then build on that. Also have you done any work experience which is a MUST, without work experience in the medical field you are not going to get in. You need to mention what you do in your spare time, whether you read any medical literatures, any awards/achievements you have... but do not bullshit in your PS as they will catch you out.. unless you can back it up strongly Anyway I hope that has put some perspective to ur PS.. if you need any help jus give us a shout or pm, I would have given you mine but I cant seem to find mine. Good luck. Last edited by CrazYt™; 15-06-2007 at 15:55.

15-06-2007, 15:59	#24 (permalink)
PaKi PwInCeSs Respected Member Location: . Gender: Female Country: Posts: 7,869 My Mood: I have 15 Blog Entries Rep Power: 311 Rep Level:	oOoh.. Good Luck with ur A levels results.. U chose exactly the same as me.. Biology.. Chemistry and Physics... Just keep at it.. Coz after I done my Alevels in sciences' uni was a big NO NO for me .. So Good Luck..x 'A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.' - Marilyn Monroe

15-06-2007, 16:16	#26 (permalink)
Guji-Ji Respected Member Location: London Age: 20 Gender: Male Country: Posts: 13,382 I have 6 Blog Entries Rep Power: 503 Rep Level:	Man im so dreading writing my one, im a lazy mofo. ^^Thanks to the Evil_G^^

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