Personal Statement - The Asian Place - Desi Forum

Angel · 15-06-2007, 10:57

this is soo stupid man this is how far ive got

My love of science and aspiration for a medical career is reflected in my A-Level choices where good time management, self motivated study skills and ability to cope with stress and pressure are essential. Biology ,Physics and Chemistry have helped me further my interest and develop my analytical skills. I believe all the qualities I have developed through my courses are essential for any good doctor.
I will participated in the award scheme which enabled me to achieve a first aid certificate including cardiopulmonary resuscitation training.

I also enhanced my inter-personal, communication and team building abilities, valuable skills for any medical occupation, I witnessed during my experience.I have volunteered at a local surgery this can help with the public in a different environment. I enjoy reading, mainly factual books to expand my general knowledge. To relax, I enjoy sports including basketball and football

is it ok?

Ridz · 15-06-2007, 11:01

Nope Nope Nope Nope

Not in depth enough.... you need to expand each point... you need to say about your social life.. what you will gain out of uni apart from a degree

It long man...

Angel · 15-06-2007, 11:03

bollocks, so each of the points ive made have to be expanded?
do i have to say more stuff bou ma normal life?

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:03

yeh what ridz have said ^^
hold on leme put mine one up its for ICT but if it help ya

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:04

I have decided to apply for Computing or Business Computing because I see the course as the next logical step from studying my BTEC National Diploma for IT Practitioners (Software Route Stream) at Aylesbury College. I am looking forward to learning the use of information systems in a business context such as project management and strategic information systems. I would like to take the opportunity to undertake a placement year because this will allow me to develop my skills further in the workplace.

Whilst studying my A-Levels, I have enjoyed studying a number of units including the Introduction to Software Development which was based on Visual Basic programming language. The unit consisted of programming a Visual Basic interface in which I achieved a Distinction. I am also very interested in Communications Technology; I found learning about Computer Networks, Data Communications and the Internet very interesting. I have gained a wider knowledge of computing and believe I can achieve high grades throughout my education. I am currently on a course to achieve grade DDM which is equal to 320 points.

In my spare time, I carry out work on Art as I have previously studied AS Level Art & Design; I gained grade B. I am studying AS Photography at college; the course is creative in exploring the still-life.

Whilst studying full-time at college, I have carried out extra curricula activities. This included being a teacher assistant at the Hartwell Day Centre where I taught elderly people how to use computer software such as Microsoft Word; they designed cards and letters.

I am hard-working, enthusiastic and always keen to meet deadlines. I am an open person, can easily interact with colleagues and share constructive views and opinions.

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:05

thats my personal statement and iv got into uni's for that so just see what point you could use from it

Angel · 15-06-2007, 11:08

oh thankz your a star you have so many good points

Ridz · 15-06-2007, 11:08

Originally Posted by Angel

bollocks, so each of the points ive made have to be expanded?
do i have to say more stuff bou ma normal life?

yh but dnt stress u got until january 2 send ur ucas off n im sure ur college/skewl will help u with ur personal statement next year

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:09

its kool babe....make sure they are written in the right places etc....aint ur tutor checking ur statement or helping u >?

Ridz · 15-06-2007, 11:10

Originally Posted by Sidra240

its kool babe....make sure they are written in the right places etc....aint ur tutor checking ur statement or helping u >?

doubt it... last few weeks they probz cnt b bothered... isnt it usualli a september/october fing lol

Angel · 15-06-2007, 11:10

i have to get mine in by october cuz i wana go into medicine
no she aint helped much yet but im gna start hasslin her soo

Ritz_Crackers · 15-06-2007, 11:11

Originally Posted by Sidra240

I have decided to apply for Computing or Business Computing because I see the course as the next logical step from studying my BTEC National Diploma for IT Practitioners (Software Route Stream) at Aylesbury College. I am looking forward to learning the use of information systems in a business context such as project management and strategic information systems. I would like to take the opportunity to undertake a placement year because this will allow me to develop my skills further in the workplace.

Whilst studying my A-Levels, I have enjoyed studying a number of units including the Introduction to Software Development which was based on Visual Basic programming language. The unit consisted of programming a Visual Basic interface in which I achieved a Distinction. I am also very interested in Communications Technology; I found learning about Computer Networks, Data Communications and the Internet very interesting. I have gained a wider knowledge of computing and believe I can achieve high grades throughout my education. I am currently on a course to achieve grade DDM which is equal to 320 points.

In my spare time, I carry out work on Art as I have previously studied AS Level Art & Design; I gained grade B. I am studying AS Photography at college; the course is creative in exploring the still-life.

Whilst studying full-time at college, I have carried out extra curriculaR activities. This included being a teacher assistant at the Hartwell Day Centre where I taught elderly people how to use computer software such as Microsoft Word; they designed cards and letters.

I am hard-working, enthusiastic and always keen to meet deadlines. I am an open person, can easily interact with colleagues and share constructive views and opinions.

Spelling mistake dear.

And you ain't learnt fuck all about networking lol, you keep asking me :P

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:11

start asking ur tutor thats the only way they will help ya

Sidra240 · 15-06-2007, 11:12

Originally Posted by Ritz_Crackers

Spelling mistake dear.

And you ain't learnt fuck all about networking lol, you keep asking me :P

where's the spelling mistake.....

and shat it...my tutor said i did know about it hehehe hypocrite!

Angel · 15-06-2007, 11:15

na ma tutor been goin on bou personal staements since march or sumin but i just ignore her she lyk i wnt to see a draft by next week bt im jus toooo lazy damn.ne way she thretenred to tell me dad bou it so thought shyt beta get on with it now.

15-06-2007, 10:57	#1 (permalink)
Angel Member Location: ___/---/___ Age: 20 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 451 Rep Power: 0 Rep Level:	Personal Statement this is soo stupid man this is how far ive got My love of science and aspiration for a medical career is reflected in my A-Level choices where good time management, self motivated study skills and ability to cope with stress and pressure are essential. Biology ,Physics and Chemistry have helped me further my interest and develop my analytical skills. I believe all the qualities I have developed through my courses are essential for any good doctor. I will participated in the award scheme which enabled me to achieve a first aid certificate including cardiopulmonary resuscitation training. I also enhanced my inter-personal, communication and team building abilities, valuable skills for any medical occupation, I witnessed during my experience.I have volunteered at a local surgery this can help with the public in a different environment. I enjoy reading, mainly factual books to expand my general knowledge. To relax, I enjoy sports including basketball and football is it ok?

15-06-2007, 11:04	#5 (permalink)
Sidra240 Respected Member Location: Uxbridge/AY Age: 22 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 10,088 My Mood: I have 4 Blog Entries Rep Power: 309 Rep Level:	I have decided to apply for Computing or Business Computing because I see the course as the next logical step from studying my BTEC National Diploma for IT Practitioners (Software Route Stream) at Aylesbury College. I am looking forward to learning the use of information systems in a business context such as project management and strategic information systems. I would like to take the opportunity to undertake a placement year because this will allow me to develop my skills further in the workplace. Whilst studying my A-Levels, I have enjoyed studying a number of units including the Introduction to Software Development which was based on Visual Basic programming language. The unit consisted of programming a Visual Basic interface in which I achieved a Distinction. I am also very interested in Communications Technology; I found learning about Computer Networks, Data Communications and the Internet very interesting. I have gained a wider knowledge of computing and believe I can achieve high grades throughout my education. I am currently on a course to achieve grade DDM which is equal to 320 points. In my spare time, I carry out work on Art as I have previously studied AS Level Art & Design; I gained grade B. I am studying AS Photography at college; the course is creative in exploring the still-life. Whilst studying full-time at college, I have carried out extra curricula activities. This included being a teacher assistant at the Hartwell Day Centre where I taught elderly people how to use computer software such as Microsoft Word; they designed cards and letters. I am hard-working, enthusiastic and always keen to meet deadlines. I am an open person, can easily interact with colleagues and share constructive views and opinions. Last edited by Sidra240; 15-06-2007 at 11:04.

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15-06-2007, 11:01	#2 (permalink)
Ridz Respected Member Location: England Age: 22 Gender: Male Posts: 6,330 Rep Power: 245 Rep Level:	Nope Nope Nope Nope Not in depth enough.... you need to expand each point... you need to say about your social life.. what you will gain out of uni apart from a degree It long man...

15-06-2007, 11:03	#3 (permalink)
Angel Member Location: ___/---/___ Age: 20 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 451 Rep Power: 0 Rep Level:	bollocks, so each of the points ive made have to be expanded? do i have to say more stuff bou ma normal life?

15-06-2007, 11:03	#4 (permalink)
Sidra240 Respected Member Location: Uxbridge/AY Age: 22 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 10,088 My Mood: I have 4 Blog Entries Rep Power: 309 Rep Level:	yeh what ridz have said ^^ hold on leme put mine one up its for ICT but if it help ya

15-06-2007, 11:05	#6 (permalink)
Sidra240 Respected Member Location: Uxbridge/AY Age: 22 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 10,088 My Mood: I have 4 Blog Entries Rep Power: 309 Rep Level:	thats my personal statement and iv got into uni's for that so just see what point you could use from it

15-06-2007, 11:08	#7 (permalink)
Angel Member Location: ___/---/___ Age: 20 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 451 Rep Power: 0 Rep Level:	oh thankz your a star you have so many good points

15-06-2007, 11:09	#9 (permalink)
Sidra240 Respected Member Location: Uxbridge/AY Age: 22 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 10,088 My Mood: I have 4 Blog Entries Rep Power: 309 Rep Level:	its kool babe....make sure they are written in the right places etc....aint ur tutor checking ur statement or helping u >?

15-06-2007, 11:10	#11 (permalink)
Angel Member Location: ___/---/___ Age: 20 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 451 Rep Power: 0 Rep Level:	i have to get mine in by october cuz i wana go into medicine no she aint helped much yet but im gna start hasslin her soo

15-06-2007, 11:11	#13 (permalink)
Sidra240 Respected Member Location: Uxbridge/AY Age: 22 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 10,088 My Mood: I have 4 Blog Entries Rep Power: 309 Rep Level:	start asking ur tutor thats the only way they will help ya

15-06-2007, 11:15	#15 (permalink)
Angel Member Location: ___/---/___ Age: 20 Gender: Female Country: Posts: 451 Rep Power: 0 Rep Level:	na ma tutor been goin on bou personal staements since march or sumin but i just ignore her she lyk i wnt to see a draft by next week bt im jus toooo lazy damn.ne way she thretenred to tell me dad bou it so thought shyt beta get on with it now.

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