little help #3 - The Asian Place - Desi Forum

Iroquois Pliskin · 14-01-2009, 20:50

1 more peice of writing teheh.

write about a festival you have been to
write up a description saying

why it took place
what u did
what did u wear on the occasion
what u enjoyed abt it

120 words

fire away!

neo_ · 14-01-2009, 21:07

oo, this reminds me of one of my blog posts from a few years ago when i was in india....

My mum tells me “god is coming to our house tmr morning. I’ve invited god to come at 8am.”

I don’t like to argue with her materialistic views of god so I just agree to it. It’s some random 2 day ceremony for me and her starting at 8am for about an hour and a maraj carries it out. I had no idea what it was for! Felt like a marriage at one point!

The next day mum said it’s a ritual that brings good fortunes to the family. I’m gonna start playing the lottery from now on. The maraj also said he does astrology readings! That was cool so I gave him my birth date and time. I look fwd to that! I like that kinda stuff.

On the 2nd day, near the end of the ceremony, a kamikaze flies jumped into the holy milk. The maraj picked it out with his fingers. The fly lived btw. And at the end the milk was passed around the room for everyone to drink a tiny bit. I was like “WHAT”.

I whispered to mum that I’m not having any. I was about to get up and leave as it was finished, and my cousin says "wait u haven’t had the milk yet!"

I’m like SHIT. I told her I don’t want it cos a fly fell in it and she smiled and gave this “u weirdo” look. I wanted to shout to everyone “A FUCKIN FLY FELL IN IT MAN!!!!! A FUCKIN FLY! U DIRTY BASTARDS!”

I didn't have any. Later on, I asked mum if she had any and she said she didn’t want to but had to, so took a tiny bit. Haha. I think she felt too ashamed to refuse it in front of everyone. She wouldn’t have had any if the room wasn’t full of ppl.

mindstate · 14-01-2009, 21:39

why it took place
what u did
what did u wear on the occasion
what u enjoyed abt it

1.it was the puerto rican day parade in new york city...
2. haha
3. a hawaiian shirt and rainbow shorts holding a tambourine in my hand
4. the music.

Iroquois Pliskin · 14-01-2009, 21:49

mindstate.fail.

call that 120 words? lol

mindstate · 14-01-2009, 21:51

Kayz · 15-01-2009, 11:12

Pliskin you naughty boy! Why are you getting some people to do it for you! You wont learn anything man! tut!

D351-GUND4M · 15-01-2009, 12:19

^
ohhh yeh..............thats a de ja vu for me....

but 120 words is easy..though....

i think its cuz we are lazy...

a e-buddy helpt me wid my essay once

i was stressing..but a lil help sure made wonders...

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Iroquois Pliskin Respected Member Tournaments Won: 6 Location: UK Glasgow Gender: Male Country: Posts: 12,192 My Mood: Rep Power: 439 Rep Level:	little help #3 1 more peice of writing teheh. write about a festival you have been to write up a description saying why it took place what u did what did u wear on the occasion what u enjoyed abt it 120 words fire away! - Looks like someone has got smoke grenades for Xmas -

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mindstate Loyal Member Location: uk Gender: Male Country: Posts: 3,654 Rep Power: 272 Rep Level:	why it took place what u did what did u wear on the occasion what u enjoyed abt it 1.it was the puerto rican day parade in new york city... 2. haha 3. a hawaiian shirt and rainbow shorts holding a tambourine in my hand 4. the music. Last edited by mindstate; 14-01-2009 at 21:40.

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Iroquois Pliskin Respected Member Tournaments Won: 6 Location: UK Glasgow Gender: Male Country: Posts: 12,192 My Mood: Rep Power: 439 Rep Level:	mindstate.fail. call that 120 words? lol - Looks like someone has got smoke grenades for Xmas -

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neo_ Banned Location: SE London Gender: Male Country: Posts: 335 My Mood: Rep Power: 0 Rep Level:	oo, this reminds me of one of my blog posts from a few years ago when i was in india.... My mum tells me “god is coming to our house tmr morning. I’ve invited god to come at 8am.” I don’t like to argue with her materialistic views of god so I just agree to it. It’s some random 2 day ceremony for me and her starting at 8am for about an hour and a maraj carries it out. I had no idea what it was for! Felt like a marriage at one point! The next day mum said it’s a ritual that brings good fortunes to the family. I’m gonna start playing the lottery from now on. The maraj also said he does astrology readings! That was cool so I gave him my birth date and time. I look fwd to that! I like that kinda stuff. On the 2nd day, near the end of the ceremony, a kamikaze flies jumped into the holy milk. The maraj picked it out with his fingers. The fly lived btw. And at the end the milk was passed around the room for everyone to drink a tiny bit. I was like “WHAT”. I whispered to mum that I’m not having any. I was about to get up and leave as it was finished, and my cousin says "wait u haven’t had the milk yet!" I’m like SHIT. I told her I don’t want it cos a fly fell in it and she smiled and gave this “u weirdo” look. I wanted to shout to everyone “A FUCKIN FLY FELL IN IT MAN!!!!! A FUCKIN FLY! U DIRTY BASTARDS!” I didn't have any. Later on, I asked mum if she had any and she said she didn’t want to but had to, so took a tiny bit. Haha. I think she felt too ashamed to refuse it in front of everyone. She wouldn’t have had any if the room wasn’t full of ppl.

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D351-GUND4M Loyal Member Location: ガンダム Throne London ''HYPE DA FUNK'' Age: 24 Gender: Male Country: Posts: 3,720 My Mood: I have 4 Blog Entries Rep Power: 153 Rep Level:	^ ohhh yeh..............thats a de ja vu for me.... but 120 words is easy..though.... i think its cuz we are lazy... a e-buddy helpt me wid my essay once i was stressing..but a lil help sure made wonders... Gundam ''Last Showdown'' Some People are Sweet an Yet so Bitter...So Best Thing To Do is Sour Them...That Way There Rotten

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