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.,. BrOkeN .,.

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First time in my life I lost control,
First time in my life
felt so alone,

the pain, the hurt,
couldnt take it NO MORE,
smashed all to pieces,
from my fingers-blood poured,

I looked at myself,
all shattered an broke,
just like my mirror,
there wasnt no hope,

cant look inside,
you'l see what is shown,
just like my mirror,
my feelings = unknown,

I dont want attention,
I dont want no praise,
I just want the love
from my own that I crave.

what are you thinking?
are you thinking the same?
Im used to it now.

I smile in the rain. . .

By MiSs x

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Updated 03-01-2009 at 01:08 by MiSs



  1. MR WHO's Avatar
    im speachless...
    MiSs plz sniff sniff

    as always...
  2. Guji-Ji's Avatar
    That was really heart wrenching..

    I'm here too...
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