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02-12-2008, 22:23
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i love this poem
it's so emotional... ... .. If I could have just one wish, I would wish to wake up everyday to the sound of your breath on my neck, the warmth of your lips on my cheek, the touch of your fingers on my skin, and the feel of your heart beating with mine... Knowing that I could never find that feeling with anyone other than you  
love and be lovable 
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02-12-2008, 22:26
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trus me sis its so tru and i no the feelin but wen that 1 person is taken away from u it dam hurts man
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02-12-2008, 22:30
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The wish i always wanted is that special someone in my life,
i look for her, all the time... looking looking no matter how hard i look... i never find her or rather she walks pass, perhaps im the invisible man... no matter how strong my heart is, my reward is not as easy of a task. perhaps destiny wanna fool around wid me some more... everything happens for a reason, perhaps im good or perhaps im bad one way or the other... giving up is never an awnser..... gotta keep of fighting. were theres a will, theres always a way.....right?
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02-12-2008, 22:32
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gt it in 1 desi
did u ryt it urself
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02-12-2008, 22:35
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...it jus came from the heart....
things like that is always in my heart....
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02-12-2008, 22:36
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that was really beautiful seriousily
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02-12-2008, 22:44
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cheers.......
ive been having this weird dreams latly... everytime i have that dream it makes me wonder, how comes you appear in my dreams an never on my life, i donno what your face looks like but i know you exist outside mylife. i wonder to myself when i look at the sky, i wonder if my cinderella NO! i mean my wife will she ever realise the pain an feelings in my heart... will she be the one to heal my soul, many darkness lies widin my heart... only thing missing is i need her light to heal me...no matter what thats the missing key... then you can say im complete.. I Wear 2 Mask's One Keeps Me Strong, But The Other Shows My Feelings... both mask cannot become a whole....they will always counter one another...
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02-12-2008, 22:47
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wow dats amazin desi u shud be a shayar lol
no serioisily u wud get far
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02-12-2008, 22:57
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i used to be an poet...if thats what you ment...
used to have many poems.. but ive removed them. an tryed to focus on life then feeling lost... but yet i faild... no matter how hard i try to forget, the small things in life will trigger it... thats when ill realise, im not complete... destiny is testing me. eveytime i look at the sky that blue sky i see abit of light no matter what i feel as if i gotta put my hand out an see if i can reach that light... perhaps im waiting for you to grab my hand... however what about u, will you grab my hand if i put it out... this world we live in its so small..but also so big, seems like we can never find eatchother...
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02-12-2008, 22:59
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truly amazin realli its great
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02-12-2008, 23:06
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theres always somthing out there that will stop you from gettin to your happyness,
even though ive lost my cinderella... i gotta knw that......giving up is not an option... no matter what, ill wear this mask cant show the fact my heart lost that light i once had, taken a very long time to obtain such an objective... but in the end was that light even mine to clam? or was it jus a test to see how badly i wannted to catch that light... perhaps i faild cuz i jus wanted to catch the light b4 it runs away.... in the end that light accully escapt...guess my heart has always lived for darkness...
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02-12-2008, 23:08
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seems like u speak out of experience
dats what i fink i could be rong but dem feelings come from sum1 that has had it tuff
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