Words

[Guji-Ji]

Was in the mood to write something so I did. Can't flow for shit so its kinda crap but I gave it my best shot.

Broken promises, empty words,
Nothing that I ain’t heard.
Sorry oh this, sorry oh that,
Something came up, oh my tyres flat.
While I’m here sat with a gat,
Wondering whether I should splat
My brains onto my mouse mat.
Finger on trigger, things getting risky,
Thinking whether they’d miss me or diss me.
Eyes gettin misty,
Feel the adrenaline, need a pissy.
No going back now, gonna pop now,
Heart’s gonna stop now.
Thoughts run through my head,
What would they say if I were dead?
Would they simply RIP and put me to bed,
Or would they wonder why I went painted red.
Mum comes to mind, she’d be devastated,
So amazing, she’s never hated,
Wish I had I her power to be elated,
Let my problems go, keep my heart ungated.
She’ll miss me, don’t want to part,
Could I really break her heart?
Could write a letter but where would I start?
Yes, No, Yes No,
Mind starts to slow, to flow, to know,
That I can’t go.
Got things to do, people to see,
Mum to please, gotta give her ease.
Gifts to give, a life to live,
Need to forgive.
Throw the gun on the floor and open the door,
No ones at home, let out a roar,
Go to the phone, think of mum and brother,
Dial her number and tell her I love her.

[zoned]

pretty good mate, not always about the words but the concept...i like the concept, deep and meaningful

[Shaz.]

Zubair wow that was so deep!!

[Guji-Ji]

Originally Posted by zoned pretty good mate, not always about the words but the concept...i like the concept, deep and meaningful

Thanks man.

Originally Posted by craaaaazyshaz Zubair wow that was so deep!!

Thank you...

[Guji-Ji]

Not anywhere as good as first one. And the flows even shitter. But hey, wanted to express, so I did.

I am the fool that I am,
Keep thinking you might give a damn,
Throw me a smile but it’s all a fucking sham.
Making promises and then breaking them,
If your gonna do that why you fucking making them.
2 months, no words, no texts, no calling,
All of a sudden phone rings and your bawling,
What’s wrong? I’m calling.
‘Ah this and that, My mans a prat,
Getting fat and my mates a rat.’
I’m listening attentively,
Acting sensibly,
Being nice ostensibly.
‘I love you, your such a good mate,
Always listen to me, you never hate.’
I’m smiling, thinking she’s come to her senses,
Readjusted her lenses, So I drop my defenses
‘Don’t worry, I’m always here,
To give you my ear, to wipe your tear’.
She’s okay now so she disappears again,
Doesn’t stay long enough to even sense my pain,
Feel shit, been left alone again,
Matter seems so simple and plain.
I vow to never be a fool again,
To never be someone’s tool again,
My head will rule again.
Until the phone rings and she’s crying,
Can’t do this to her, I’m not lying.
Put the phone to my ear and I start to hear,
Knowing after this, she’ll dissapear.

[Cheeky_Princess]

I know exactly who the 2nd one is aimed at man

its really getting to you?

but in general there both really deep and good...

[Guji-Ji]

Originally Posted by Cheeky_Princess I know exactly who the 2nd one is aimed at man its really getting to you? but in general there both really deep and good...

It is and it isn't. I've added things to make it flow lol... but yeah generally it is.

[shelim]

dont pick up the phone next time... as im guessing it about someone you like...

[Guji-Ji]

Originally Posted by shelim dont pick up the phone next time... as im guessing it about someone you like...

Lol nah i dont like her... shes just a mate.