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"fuk the poo riddle all day I do nothing like dr dolittle procrastinating is the worst thing my brain keeps lagging like high ping it's no de ja vu, but groundhog day my minds hogged ..."
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Old 18-05-2009, 22:39   #31 (permalink)
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fuk the poo riddle
all day I do nothing like dr dolittle
procrastinating is the worst thing
my brain keeps lagging like high ping
it's no de ja vu, but groundhog day
my minds hogged today, vision gone astray
like a target, heads blown away
but im still here today

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Old 18-05-2009, 22:48   #32 (permalink)
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my brain keeps lagging like high ping

LOLL

just shows we play cs too much
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Old 18-05-2009, 22:51   #33 (permalink)
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revisions a bitch
wouldnt have to do it if i was rich
id hitch with a bitch
fuck her and throw her in a ditch
ap thinkin since when did guji start sayin bitch
motherfuckers since i was rich

too much biggie...

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Old 18-05-2009, 22:52   #34 (permalink)
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Old 18-05-2009, 22:57   #35 (permalink)
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lmao guji awesomeness

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Old 19-05-2009, 20:49   #36 (permalink)
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LOLLLLLLLL Guj smashed it.

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titts and over what the age of consent be
that said you don't have to be that far over
sometimes jailbait is worth goin jail over"
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Old 24-05-2009, 12:12   #37 (permalink)
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Freestyle without thinkin too much.......



"when I talk about my possessions
I ain't talkin about things I own
I'm talkin 'bout the things that ask questions of me
when I'm all on my own
like if you're all about what you can do for yourself
why the fuck do you put yourself in the hands of someone else
that shit don't make sense and I don't even get it
sometimes you have to learn the hard way before you even get it
or did I get it before I got it, get it?
I thought I knew it before I was in it
but when you're in it, like me?
you're in it for real
but fuck it, life's a bitch dude
if everyone is goin to Hell this just the prelude"

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she said she liked my brain
and then she showed me hers
and I said I like her brain
so we felt the same
you could say we're on the same brain wave
that said it wasn't brain I gave, get it?

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I got a split personality
s'why I fuck with two chicks
one dick on my anatomy
so when I say I swing both ways
I ain't talking about my sexuality
animalistic Pakistani originality
so when we sexxin,looks like a porno bestiality
if this was Mortal Kombat this be the animality
coz when it comes to the time to 'finish her'
my end games a fatality.

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I hate rap; money, hoes sex and weed
When are we gonna start exposing those in need
Public enemy came with Fight The Power
Like a flower children blossom and cower under a shower
of negative influences from those in the media indusTRY
Can't no one see, they rape the innocent mind into a false securiTY
I'll take you to the candy shop no no no, i'll let you lick my lollipop no no no
Fuck no; bring back hiphop!

Doesn't rhyme as nicely as i'd of liked, but you get the message...

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Gwan that's one of the best to grace this thread....

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I'm sat wondering why, my future's passing me by
it's moving faster than the clouds in the sky
struggling to walk how am I guna learn how to fly
one day I'ma shine brighter than the sunlight in July
possessing the power of when two energy's collide
tomorrow is today's past, no time to subside
I often rely on the memories that reside
the tears that I cried have ran out and just dried
even if the maths is wrong, my priorities need to divide
so now I shall decide, the order of my humility and pride
the window of opportunity is nigh, not time to abide
the future has no place to hide apart from the day after you died
too late for regrets then if at the gates your denied!




meh... random

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LOL I like it: cept I dunno if it was deliberate?

"tomorrow is today's past, no time to subside"

Today is tomorrow's past no? But even if it wasn't

"even if the maths is wrong, my priorities need to divide"

sorts it out nicely!

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lol kind of, what it meant was what happened yesterday (today's past) is likely to happen tomorrow, with a bit more essence towards it being like groundhog day


the maths bit is if anything is wrong and doesn't add up properly I still need to divide it i.e. if there's so much to do but it doesn't divide into time that I have, I still need to find a way (so in terms of maths, it might not be able to divide, but I still have to find a way) i.e. 25 hrs work in 24 etc.


just random shit though, didn't think it would be deep lol

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