Rhyme a Day

[Cheeky_Princess]

You guys think your hard
Dissing each other with a few bars
Zero on it like its some work
Guji thinks his fucking your girl
EG wants a piece of me
Tariq can't have me

Don't like to diss
but this is some fun shit
Keeping AP alive
Now lets hear your next rhyme....


hehe

[Zero]

She's the type that will make you crazy,
Make your mind go blank and your eyes quite hazy,
She's always there, always trying,
to tempt you, with lust and u end up buying,
sh*t that you don't need, but you do it for the sake,
knowing that if you didn't, you'd make or break,
I mean, c'mon man, she knows she'll get her way,
whether your straight or gay, she'll make you sway,
to use her at ur discretion, man its a shame,
that we so weak willed, to let her treat us that way?
Well, some of us veterans learn and obey,
the laws of this type, you just need to say,
to yourself that this aint on,
need to control yourself from these urges, it's worse than porn,
But she still there every day, waiting for you,
to make that mistake of giving in to her cue,
satisfying your wildest dreams, all you can imagine,
with one simple twist that you keep on coming,
onto her so she feels satisfied,
and gratified,
and u know when she's at that stage, you've unified,
yourself with her soul, you know thats her goal,
to get you addicted to her, your heart aint beating, its turned to coal,
these typa chicks, they're everywhere man, turning people insane, for sure.
Even though she aint a real chick, you still get that feeling in your tummy,
That in the end, shes just a disease called money.

[Iroquois Pliskin]

Damn. Good shit man.

[Evil_Genious]

I like it Z - I din't spot it, I thought it was about weed smoke at first LOL.... Love song about money? LOL that's a wicked idea!

[Guji-Ji]

That was awesome! Didn't expect it at all.

[Iroquois Pliskin]

i expected to be about some bewafa kuri get meh but its all about the monies

[shelim]

All about the benjamins....

[Tariq2009]

you can be a good person if you got morality
don't need books or man telling you what to be
delete those damn mercenaries of your ipod
take away religions and you'd still have a god
take away your emotion, stop and just think
without people religion would just go extinct
it would hit a iceberg and it would quickly sink
but without religion humans wouldn't go extinct
they get in yours heart, exploit you financially
profits and money, that's the religion industry

[Eye Candy]

Zero u got some good sh*t there! Loved the twist. Tariq niice lil drop there.. short, but to the point.. Hmm i see some ya''ll got some good flow & a niice set of rhymes.. But others.. smh.. Damn ya' shouldn't post in here! Elevate mofo's!! ;-)

[Evil_Genious]

Zero u got some good sh*t there! Loved the twist. Tariq niice lil drop there.. short, but to the point.. Hmm i see some ya''ll got some good flow & a niice set of rhymes.. But others.. smh.. Damn ya' shouldn't post in here! Elevate mofo's!! ;-)

Comments like this deter people from vibing. This isn't a professional Rap forum, in fact it's not even Rap - it's people having fun with words. I would request a Moderator delete all faff out of this thread so peope can get back to just posting rhymes - only thing that needs to elevate is your attitude. Flow is how a MC will deliver the words not necessarily the words on the paper - it's the words and the delivery off the tounge and voice tone. Anyway - good thing you don't post anymore.

[Eye Candy]

Yo it were jokes!! Why so serious huh.. Yes flow is how a Mc delivers the words, some stuff don't have flow nor words, & words on paper need to make sense.
Blah..

[Guji-Ji]

I'm sicker than cancer infecting all your organs,
You're weaponless while I carry all guns,
Smack the breath out of you and leave you with sore lungs,
Make you run like I'm the fuckin' law son,
Oh you're not finished you want more son?
Well feel the venemous vibes of my verbs,
Cut you like knives through my words,
Cleanse your ethnicity like a Serb,
Leave you dead under city lights on the kerb,
Make your body smoke like the herb.
My rhymes ain't pretty on the hip-hop scene,
But they'll leave you bloody like a Hitchcock scene.
Fants want more like a bitch whose a cock fiend,
And I keep giving like the Beatles on the rock scene.
I could go on like a moany bitch on the phone,
But I'm gone like I been killed in Pakistan by a drone.

Summin I wrote while I was away.

[Evil_Genious]

Thanks for returning this thread back to rhymes Guj.... Sick verse as we've come to expect from you now.....

[Crazy.Chicka]

I dont know how to rhyme,
It feels as though, Im committing a crime.
Its time to get down real low
And let the music flow..

[Zero]

Lol gwan chicka, getting in the scene, u need a gold sticka,
making it sound too mean, getting too slicka.