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    not saying its a compo, just i can do better since mine is short and not put alot of thought...with time..ill come good...just like liverpool do lmao

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    Ok cut the GunSpam, keep to the program.

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    So I met this girl called Summer,
    She had a rear end like a hummer,
    No surprise my first thoughts were to want to bum her,
    But there was more to her then her bumper,
    She wasn't dumb but I was dumber,
    But she told me she was only here for a while,
    So in this time I tried my best to make her smile,
    And for that she knew I'd have run a mile,
    We had a good time, full of fun and laughter,
    Didn't think about what was to happen after,
    Such a short time but she became my rafter.
    So September came and she had to go away,
    Was left speechless, didn't know what to say,
    She smiled me and left me with a promise,
    Said 'Honest, no lie, I'll be back the following May'.


    Hmm..

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    summer i thank you for bringing joy in my early years
    now it seems you have taken that away from me and left me in tears
    can't forget those times when the sun would shine bright until late in the evening
    playing all day in my neighbourhood i come back home
    tired like a boxing champ from a boxing ring
    now summer has gone away without any warning
    just like my mother did.... im still mourning..

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    Gujju, only you'll know if you missed the point that you wanted to make.
    I totally missed the point with mine.
    ...I had such a different idea, but, once the words get down, it's hard to give them a direction... You just let them paint the picture.
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    Summer 2.0

    I can feel the cold.
    The cool bitter air slaps my face.
    My eyes sting.

    Right now, I remember her more than ever.
    Pangs of lonliness run through me.
    ...but I shake it off.

    Empty Promises.
    Whispers.
    She blew Hot, yet, she also knew how to make me Cold.
    Yes.
    She. Her. Summer...
    Intimacy would follow periods of Absence.
    No notice, no warning. She'd just Up and Leave.

    Leave me with questions...?
    I don't know, I couldn't ask them before she returned.
    She is yellow.
    Her illuminous dresses blinding me from the Truth.

    I didn't see.
    Blinded?
    Most likely.

    She does that.
    That Summer.

    Playful, Flirtacious Summer.
    Her sultry eyes tickling the fancy of some hundreds of thouasands.

    She comforted me, and held me to her bosom,
    "It's only six months," she says.
    Six months.
    Six months of seducing entire nations upon nations.
    I am green.
    Jealousy filling my very core.

    Which I forget.
    For getting a whiff of her scent when the wind blows.
    Blowing butterflies all around my stomach.

    ...The cold air envelopes me.
    Mocking me, taunting me.
    I allow it.
    Who is she to dampen my mood?
    I am Confidence and Insecurity.

    Evil Genious is My Budden Man.

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    In keeping with the randomness:


    They say the way a Paki swagg shimmer
    it's like everyday a day of Summer
    shining on you dicks like Nesbit
    except shit, she Bangladeshi
    but shit she wouldn't bang a desi
    coz they stink like shit, but that's racist
    and I ain't on that shit, so I won't say it
    that be some obscene shit
    except I said it, but did I mean it?
    probably didn't, but that's political
    I'm just freestyling don't be so analytical
    critical of what I spit but oh yeah
    this thread about Summer so
    that's why I say it for no reason right here
    and while I'm here I'll do a Summersalt

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    June 09 our journey began again.
    Watched you come out while I was stuck inside with an exam that would decide my fate.
    I sat there planning what i shall do with you when my fate is finally decided.
    A list was made, aims were set and goals were made but now your gone and it feels I've wasted my time with you again.
    But now when i look back I've had a good time with you but just not achieved what I wanted to do.
    But like you can never be predicted neither can my actions and now that I look back to my time with you it makes me smile on what I've done with you.
    From random days out to just skipping along singing to a tune.
    My time with you was when I came into no mans land not a college student no more and not a uni student either until fate was finally reveled.
    The day came full of fear and joy.
    I had made it but off course I did have to sacrifice a bit of my time with you.
    As my last 3 weeks lead me onto working life and thus I had to sacrifice more time with you it made me see that only another 3 years to go until reality hits and the real working life begins.
    Time becomes limited and i shall only be able to meet you in the evenings.
    So when i meet you again in the next 3 years i vow to spend as much time as i can with you before our love fizzles out and I long for those lazy summer days.


    This was so much fun to write! Gosh i miss english! i think i may finally start that real blog and throw this in there...
    Eg and rab your words were wow..
    Queeny as usual your words are just the sex..
    and guji i so understand your one :P

    Last edited by Cheeky_Princess; 12-09-2009 at 02:33.


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    how do we relate to summer


    summer brings heat, heat brings sweat
    sweat is anticipation of what could be next
    summer brings out the sky, the sky is the limit
    the limit is the maximum and my life is within it
    summer brings expectations of something great
    expectations can't always be met, to which I relate
    summer brings light and light is ever present
    light can blind judgement without any intent
    summer brings enthusiasm and lots of promise
    promises are broken and enthusiasm is abolished
    summer brings us together, makes us love one another
    only to make us more distant when it's over so why bother?
    summer leaves with us wanting more and more
    we didn't get what we want, so we cause uproar

    summer leaves us showing how were spoilt to the core

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    summer is over for the day at least anyway

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    i cant speak for the uk but in my kingdom
    its been so hot n steamy, and then some!
    mid august is the oddest time to b chilly
    dont be silly if u feel me u know its hot like chili,
    or tobasco.
    on the tongue of a rascal.
    eatin spicy on the patio of a castle.
    and its a hassle got mosquitos in my face!
    a bloody infestation, i dont kill em i just lace
    my body with icky sticky bug repellant
    they dont like the smell or scent. its damn nasty
    but then again its all good im feelin happy
    cuz its summer in the parks everything is green
    its time for a picnic wit white wine and my queen
    the one in tight jeans who im tryna get up in between.
    i lick her body clean then i cook up a cuisine.
    we barbeque and get the summertime rollin
    eatin workin and playin the summer season im controllin
    "while i thought i was learning how 2 live, i have been learning how 2 die.." - da Vinci

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    spider pig ur pretty good
    "while i thought i was learning how 2 live, i have been learning how 2 die.." - da Vinci

    "log logo ka koon peethay hai, mein tho sharaab hee peetha hoon"

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    I love summer
    Equally i love my Hummer.

    ^^^^
    this deserves a rep or 2
    Last edited by incredible; 09-08-2011 at 15:11.

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