feelinz

**sunhun** · 22-10-2005, 11:22

i hate life

i jus wanna end it wit a knife or a gun,
cuz my jindagi aint fun.
as i observe tha nerve of God,
it seems like he reserves more 4 those
who dont deserve it its odd!

all i want is jus a simple innocent girl kisshug
so i can tell her how much luv
im thinkin of, give her tha world.
since i was a child i've always been hostile
ne kurri conversate, i hesitate
come up with only a smile.

i've been lonely 4 a while
cuz im too picky when im choosin.
u have 2 admit, its real tricky n confusin
tryna find the right friend slash lover
im losin my mind forever seekin
thas how i suffer. Insane
but i beleive my heart
will b releived, when i find her.
this pain is only incentive,
a constant reminder
of what an average romeo
chooses 2 go through..
persue 2 win but if i lose
ill never get close to
a rani whos as pure as pani
like i thought i was supposed to.

u see im jus a gunja tokin lafunga
a dipper who drink 2 much liquor Boooze
must b why i dont gota girl like most do
n my heart so pure, remains uncured
always gettin sicker..

dammm

**Tazmania** · 22-10-2005, 11:26

awww...is that how ur feelin yaar?..

welcome to the club newayz...
introduce urself...

**---Miss_Khan---** · 22-10-2005, 16:47

lol the kinda girl you're looking for doesn't exist, i think it's time you slightly lowered your expectations and had more of a realistic perspective of girls these days. haha x

**Guji_Romeo** · 22-10-2005, 23:03

i think that was a pretty good poem thingy you have, to be honest i must agree with mrs khan you may need to lower your expectations of gurls these days,

**Arbash Shaikh** · 22-10-2005, 23:06

awwwwwww man sunhun nice poem reflectz me 2 !!!!!!

**---Miss_Khan---** · 23-10-2005, 01:21

MISSSSSSSSSS khan, (im not married YET) t.y x

**sunhun** · 23-10-2005, 18:57

my expectations aren't high
its simplistic n realistic, why
cant 1 girl in this world exist
2 persist n stand in my midst.
dont tell me their ALL tha same
hoez without clothes n no shame,
from their toes to their nose
scandalous and lame playin games.
after material things
with thugz @ clubz 4 what they bring.
its funny if i aint a king
n got no money im a dummy.
they say i got "nuthin goin"
cuz my dough aint showin,
they want cars, houses n spouses
thas y tha towel i throw in.
but my mind will remain n
finances need chances for growin.
so when u go n insult this adult
with ur love advice,
understand that my plan
will result precise n concise.
i kno few ppl who'v sought
n fought a lot for the woman
they'v got. so if im tru to the plot
1 day i ought to have caught
that rani whos as pure as garam pani, hot hot hot

**---Miss_Khan---** · 23-10-2005, 19:22

haha, alright then, best of luck to ya x

**~*Anonymous*~** · 23-10-2005, 19:44

miss khan why are you so mean?

8)

**$xy $onz** · 23-10-2005, 20:36

awww bles ya man dats is sooo sweet i hope u find da ryt person soon

**pinky** · 24-10-2005, 20:25

awwwwwwwwww datz soo sad bless xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

**Kayz** · 25-10-2005, 00:35

cool dude!! but have you intro'd yourself on main yet?? you should dont know alot about you yet!

**abzk** · 25-10-2005, 12:48

woah! gud stuf mate!

**bananasuit** · 25-10-2005, 14:30

wow!!! WOOWWWWWEEE!!! thats really good nice to c someone original on here!! and u defo will find ur rani i can c ... ur not like most the other guys who pretend to be romeos u are a true romeo

good luck ull find the girl of ur dreams and dont lower ur expectations! if thats wot ur heart is truely lookin for then dont change ur preferences!