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    ermm I can't write poems but I can try and write some rhymes lol


    I'm in this asian place, talking to people without a face
    about my feelings with meaning, though not always the case
    the jokes help with the healing of wounds the world has placed
    soon it'll be over,
    the people I would like to embrace will leave without a trace



    ermm I think I need to practise, lol, okayz




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    i guess poems dont really have to rhyme, its just that bonus entertainment for your ears, really pulls u into deciphering the construction of the message. plus, its a good way to let out feelinz
    "while i thought i was learning how 2 live, i have been learning how 2 die.." - da Vinci

    "log logo ka koon peethay hai, mein tho sharaab hee peetha hoon"

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    yeh it don't have to rhyme, just makes it sound better

    I cannot be a poet, you need time to think, I prefer to write pointless rhymes lol, altho liney has destroyed my confidence, how shall I ever recover 8)




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    Profound words Sunhun....you got some admirable talent there.
    ONE LOVE, PEACE, HEALTH & HAPPINESS

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    Quote Originally Posted by sunhun View Post
    she keeps passin me by, and its gettin on my nerves
    everytime i try to stop her i just cant say a word
    hypnotized by her curves & her versatile style,
    she's a keeper, 4 better or 4 worse i promise i'll..
    never cheat & mistreat her as long as she do the same
    as long as i got my honey life will b sweeter again.
    but its just an illusion that i c every night deep asleep.
    dreams so real & amusing but when i wake up i feel weak
    those thoughts of being happy 2gether dissapear & vanish.
    a girl like her deserve the best shes got 2 live lavish
    and i remember the first time i saw her i had to look twice.
    style? shes got it. rare & exotic. ull c her once in ur life.
    i paid the price, i lost my chance to romance.
    she put me in a trance whenever i tried 2 advance
    where we could be girl, if u just gave me the time
    my soul redefined instead of writin about u in rhymes
    Damn.......love this......
    ONE LOVE, PEACE, HEALTH & HAPPINESS

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    Default bet ke roh len de

    i heard that love is blind and i believed it so
    until i met this girl who wouldnt even say hello
    the first time we met. thought she was all that.
    i gave her a smile when i thought she'd give me slap

    she had a cheeky style and didnt give me the time
    ignoring my approach cause she knew she was fyne
    so i stopped her stride. told her she was divine.
    told her if she wanted i could make her shine.

    but she needed the things that id never want
    fake attention and bullshit only just to flaunt.
    born a lost queen living in a planet confused
    killing my good intentions and giving me blues.

    im walking in shoes worn by lovers who suffer.
    those who live 4 others then never recover.
    i dream of a goddess who will hear my prayer
    and care like i cared to deliver me from despair
    "while i thought i was learning how 2 live, i have been learning how 2 die.." - da Vinci

    "log logo ka koon peethay hai, mein tho sharaab hee peetha hoon"

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    Oye kuthey
    "while i thought i was learning how 2 live, i have been learning how 2 die.." - da Vinci

    "log logo ka koon peethay hai, mein tho sharaab hee peetha hoon"

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    where the sun sets
    by gurtej singh



    in the crystal silence of ice and snow
    echoed through the peaks and the lake below
    sat a rishi with long coiled hair
    the song of heaven frozen in the air
    god himself sang that song
    the rishi silent, his breathing long
    then god spoke along the frozen air
    to the rishi with the long coiled hair
    o great rishi i have a need for u
    an important job that only u can do
    the rishi still, spoke not a word
    but said in silence do it yourself lord
    the lord answered, laughed out loud
    o great rishi you make me proud
    but this job must be done by hand
    it doesnt require god, it requires a man
    through all the ages to ease mans pain
    many i have sent in my name
    krishna, buddha, jasoo and rasool
    did the job and gave the tools
    sadly though it is my great pain
    that only the personality remains
    it is these cults of personality
    that keep mans soul from beign free
    i need u now to bear the sword
    that man may bow only to the word
    u must go and end this tyranny
    in 960 million u shall be
    the rishi spoke, then lets agree
    i will go but ull work through me
    ill do this job but make no claim
    so only there will b u to blame
    god in his mercy smiled and said
    then all who come must give their head
    the sacred khalsa that we'll create
    shall be in every land and state
    and when the new age comes
    look to the place of the setting sun
    there shall burn my shining light
    as the day burns away the night
    rishi dusht daman held his breath
    then transformed himself cheating death
    he flew like a halwk through the spiritual sky
    and took the birth as gobind rai
    he created the khalsa to reign supreme
    and by then was made guru gobind singh
    the sri guru he set in place
    to give its guidance through time and space
    and in this land of the setting sun
    the age of aquarius has begun
    to fan the ember of gurus light
    into a flame that is shining bright
    Last edited by sunhun; 08-08-2011 at 20:23.
    "while i thought i was learning how 2 live, i have been learning how 2 die.." - da Vinci

    "log logo ka koon peethay hai, mein tho sharaab hee peetha hoon"

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    (chico & coolwadda ft. Nate dogg - high come down)


    when i choked on my first toke of marijuana smoke
    it went down my throat now im high cuz i float
    my high stays up man dont make it come down
    just kick back relax and listen to the sounds
    of the g funk. emcees hunt for sweet blunts.
    we bump basslines n the whole street jumps!
    til i c a fly chick and i get to mackin
    she dont want THE dick, she keeps stallin n yappin
    she make my high come down its nosedivin
    shutup bitch! and lemme get to test drivin
    soon as she come close it becomes apparent
    she looks like a ferret cant tell where her hair went
    smellin like a full tub of tuna
    ugliest of fishes somethin like a baracuda
    id rather chill with buddha. forget the kama sutra bitch
    gotta bring my high up so im back to smokin soota bitch
    "while i thought i was learning how 2 live, i have been learning how 2 die.." - da Vinci

    "log logo ka koon peethay hai, mein tho sharaab hee peetha hoon"

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