feelinz

**sunhun** · 12-08-2006, 09:45

back since elementary
i wanted to make history
every place id go id
c misery its a mystery
how pain n grief can b absorbed
while its ignored
do i praise & believe in the lord
or do i stand tall & raise my sword
demand my reward
runnin toward a lifestyle
that i mentally cant afford
always fakin a bright smile
fcuk dictators and perpetrators
they look greater in the morgue.
if ur with me all aboard
help democracy bcome restored

**Honey_bee** · 12-08-2006, 10:04

Awwww some really good words there

**SwEeT_gAl** · 12-08-2006, 12:11

aww bare sweet... welcome 2 the AP. hope u meet the girl ur lookin 4.. tc

**~ॐ~иυтzαℓι¢ισυѕ~ॐ~** · 12-08-2006, 21:33

thats quite sick you know

bigup ureself

**Sidra240** · 12-08-2006, 22:26

das wiked xx

**Iroquois Pliskin** · 13-08-2006, 02:47

Sunhun...next time take aboard this advice...don't talk about ya self but a supposed person..

**sunhun** · 13-08-2006, 22:46

if u lived my life u would see
hundreds of ppl livin like me
givin their lives away daily
in and out of jail free
to roam the way snails be
slow and barely makin trails, see
its sad how bad things become thru
the experience of bad habits we succumb to.
i had no clue the friends i kno would
descend not able to comprehend and kno Good
deeds that one should always b making when
there's not even a need, we shud all partake in
the swift uplifting of others
of our sisters and brothers from other mothers.
with hate in the world we cant think straight
so what's the debate a clean slate
and headstrong state will only improve our fate

**sunhun** · 13-08-2006, 22:59

all i ever wanted was a downass bitch
a real slick chik help me rise n get rich
smoke spliffs n watch flicks jus for kiks
but this skank's pullin pranks shes got 2 many tricks
up her sleeves
lyin thru those tasty lips cant xpect me 2 believe
i can trust u wit my thingz when i leave
bitch u so naive ima king
not like them lil boys u deceive
the many things i bring u will receive no more
hit the road before i explode u whore
what good r u for, i dont want u nemore
we already did it hardcore there's nothin else 2 explore

**sunhun** · 13-08-2006, 23:33

my name is sUNhUN im a g.
i rhyme fine, and every time
i do it elegantly.

street floetry the jazz blues
thas how i kik it.
if the sound is smooth like whoa
i pick it. its gotta b wikid

to spit those fancy flows.
along with brandy wrapped in fancy bows
eye candy wrapped in pantyhose
wutevers dandy

as long as u can understand me
this vigilante dont pose for
no hoes, it doesnt come in handy
believe me

these hoochies jus want
smoochies they b problems
if u dont touch nasty
booty u can solve em

B EZ! thas wut my hunny
say b4 she please me.
she rolls my trees but takes
the papers jus 2 tease me

i love it.
cuz it fills me up with passion.
from the spark of attraction
i get that taste of sweet satisfaction
i get that taste of SWEET satisfactionnn

**SwEeT_gAl** · 14-08-2006, 20:50

heya how r u doin?

**~ॐ~иυтzαℓι¢ισυѕ~ॐ~** · 15-08-2006, 02:11

nice rhymes there sunhun

**SwEeT_gAl** · 15-08-2006, 02:13

u write some good stuff sunhun..

**sunhun** · 16-08-2006, 07:01

what u dont do,
do for love.

u tried everything
but still u wont give up.

what u dont do,
do for love.

u tried everything
but still u wont give up.

wut u dont do
to find that compatible true
loyal friend slash lover
royally blendin with 1 another
where's that symbol of love
white doves
or a simple someone?
my heart weeps
while i sleep
feel like a numbscum
nobody to hold
nobody to treasure like gold,
nobody to pleasure
at my leisure until i grow old.
my soul is meltin
cuz i got noone helpin
me become a better person
stop me from cursin
stop me from reversin,
life turnin worse 'n
wantin to b diverse,
immersing, dispersing
my seeds.
a lover, potential mother
and an uplifting brother
is what i need.
a mate to help exceed
in this life we grieve.
assist to receive
something we both
can acheive.
a humble home
with kids grown
trips around the globe
from france then to rome
then to newhere known
or unknown i dont care
as long as im there in ur zone.
ur arms are my throne
if everyday u stay
never betray and never leave me alone
goddess of love please
im on the roam
heart has no home y tease?
lonliness is sickness
a disease
without a companion
ill blow like a canon
die with ease
man, wut i wont do..
what i wont do just for luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

**SwEeT_gAl** · 16-08-2006, 14:43

thats sooo nice!...

**sunhun** · 30-08-2006, 09:07

in my regime u lose ur self esteem
wake up inbetween dreams
work like machines
its not very healthy

chasin the cream plottin extreme
money makin schemes, dirty or clean
thats my routine
until im livin wealthy

money is wat i admire
it is wat i desire 2 acquire
until i retire or expire.

if u r a buyer plz inquire
rimz on tires, tools and
jewels like saphires
wutever u need im the supplier.

my endeavor is forever
as i take the game higher.
too clever and slick man
ima quick replyer.

neva no snitch, punk bitch
cop pull me over whether
im drunk or sober
neva stop but if caught
i ought to b a quick denyer

stayin aware of bitches
starin n glarin at my riches
in despair but i dont care.
make a prayer a couple wishes

that sunhun become a bum n
cease to b so ambitious
make 'em swim with the fishes
take his breath away
a death 2day so vicious

aint my name delicious the way
u speak it your dental.
keep talking ull b
embracing metal casings 2 ur temple

cuz i love those who real
n hate the foes that pose
n conceal wut they feel.
without explainin wut the deal?

haters perpetrators and fakers
after my paper
when ur left unattended ur
apprehendid by this dictator.

tha heat gets greater
as intended until its ended
no appeal n ill feel splendid
risin like water vapor

i riseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee forever
and fall never
DYIN TO LIVE a felon yellin from this tongue
never LIVE TO DIE lord knows id rather die young